This is a fine random chapter even it is just a random writing. If you haven't stated that upfront I would believe this is a chapter you extracted from one of your books!
The story is engaging. The flow of thoughts is smooth. The only question in my mind is "what's next?"
This is a fine random chapter even it is just a random writing. If you haven't stated that upfront I would believe this is a chapter you extracted from one of your books!
The story is engaging. The flow of thoughts is smooth. The only question in my mind is "what's next?"