Lost in Feeling

Lost in Feeling

A Poem by Carlee
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Sexual nature

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I want to be lost in feeling

The feeling of being filled in more ways than one

The feeling of pain mixed with pleasure.

Never been so happy to bleed.

 

I want to loose my thoughts-- to forget them.

To forget all the voices.

To forget what I've seen.

Forget all my choices.

 

I don't want to hear their whispers.

Just your voice saying things I can't understand.

 

A thousand names

And a thousand faces.

Just to help me seperate from myself.

To get away.

To become someone else.

And while I haven't completely reached my goal.

The journey has been worth the wait.

© 2008 Carlee


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I want to loose my thoughts-- to forget them.
To forget all the voices.
To forget what I've seen.
Forget all my choices.
I love this part in your poem. I don't know your side of it, but it tied in to my life perfect. Great work!

-Adam-

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Carlee
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