Last Dance With Bella Muerte

Last Dance With Bella Muerte

A Poem by December Blaize


'Twas a fatality, a casualty, they said,
Collateral damage stained in red,
"But she's in a better place today",
Met her maker, she's passed away.
They say she's late but it seems to me
She's got all the time in a dreamless eternity,
Pushing up daisies in the meadow,
She still won't wake up tomorrow.
If she is dearly departed, or free to roam,
How could she have been called home?
You say she's lost but you know she won't be found,
No longer with us, because she's underground.
Perished, expired, like spoiled goods in the store,
Crossed over, bought a one-way ticket through the door...
And if at the end of the tunnel waits a dazzling light,
Tell me, are there stars in that goodnight?

A rose by any other name still smells as sweet,
Death by any other name still hurts as deep.

© 2012 December Blaize


Author's Note

December Blaize
This is about the way our society uses so many euphemisms for death. A euphemism is a term used in place of a more "offensive" or "taboo" word. Instead of simply saying "He's dead", people feel they must put a positive, more gentle spin on it. I can't stand it; I wish people would just tell it like it is rather than worry about being politically correct. The terms "fatality" and "casualty" are especially insulting, in my opinion.

"Bella Muerte" is Spanish for "Beautiful Death".

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Okay, I think you are my new favorite person on Writer's Cafe. You use language so well!! I love the way this poem flows, and I absolutely love the last two lines. Fantastic work.

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

211 Views
1 Review
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on May 23, 2012
Last Updated on May 23, 2012
Tags: death, euphemisms, sleep, fatality, lost, departed

Author

December Blaize
December Blaize

NC



About
I've been pretty much inactive for a while now. If you're reading this, thank you for your time, and I hope you enjoy my writing, but just know that I have no plans to post anything new at the moment.. more..

Writing