Thinking While Crying

A Poem by Summer

Lying awake thoughts in my head

Wondering why this happens before bed

well here come the crying

I feel like I'm dying

now I can't catch my breath

Could this be it? Finally my death?

You need to get help this is all in your head

but no it's not I really wish I was dead

I start to cry as my Mom sighs

she looks at my wrists and starts to cry

she leaves my room without a goodbye

I lay my head down and say to myself 'this road has come to an end'

© 2015 Summer

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Thesecuts

Wow this is amazing and i'm so not just saying that. I can completely relate to this. You're gifted and I can tell it came from deep in the heart. You will only get better, even though you can't get much better because your writing is already pretty close to perfect. I loved this. The best poems come from the place you got this. The heart, it seems that you have a beautiful heart, so keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!!

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I Am Svetlana

We all have our moments of dark thoughts. I go through depression as well, every day. My moods are so up and down, but I'm not bipolar or anything. I admire you for being a fighter, no matter how hard things may get. I'm always here if you want or need someone to talk to. I'm not asking you to trust me, but I am a good listener and able to relate. Everyone has a different story, but I'm glad you were able to tell such a tough part of yours in this piece. Very powerful and moving!