Music

A poem I wrote today

Music is

one of those

things that

has its own

way,

it’s own

flow.

It’s

unlike anything

else on

the Earth.

It’s like a

wild stallion,

completely

unpredictable

but possesses

a sort of

wild beauty.

If tamed, it

can be

the most

beautiful

and

wonderful

thing

in the

world.

Even if

one does

manage to

tame it,

that’s not a

guarantee

that it will

obey.

Music answers

to no one.

Some people

may have

a tighter grip

on it

than others,

but no one

has total

and complete

control

over it.

It can

easily slide

out of your

grasp,

even though

you’re sure

it was firm.

And that’s

just the way

it should

stay.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MusicLover]

Congrats on the win

[writingcrazy55555]

Thanks :)

[Legolas]

I love this poem. Music is truly an amazing force. I like the format you put it in. Well done.

[writingcrazy55555]

Thank you very much! I am so glad you liked it!

[Legolas]

You're welcome.

[Zeuxis]

Awesome poem written in your own style about the wide world of music. I agree with a lot of those lines personally and it will always stay the most beautiful and wonderful thing in the world.

[writingcrazy55555]

Thanks!

[Lost in Wonderland]

So true! This was such a uniquely written piece, but after I got used to the structure I was amazed at you poetic take and respect of God's great gift of music:) nice work

[writingcrazy55555]

Thanks! Yes music is one of the wonders of the world.

[Ama May Cooper]

Wonderfully. I feel much the same way music is a life within itself, its alive and its kicking it is more controlling us that us it. Beauitful presentation is suited the poem perfectly and i think it added to the piece itself.
I like the way it was simple, it was clear and it was creative. What a wonderful representation of sound and music everything you have said here is true and presented absoulutly fantasticly , thank you again for another inspirational read.

[DA]

Great Poem. I would suggest to remove "The" before the word "Earth". Good Luck :)