This is a fantastic message, that a lot of people need to hear and listen to. A wonderfully structured poem, with a unique set out, but you dont need so many capitals, just use them like normal or it becomes distracting to the eye.
Well done, I really like it!
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
My computer does that automatically, unfortunately.
I enjoyed this poem a lot, as it is highlights the difference individuality brings with it.
It has a fast rhythm but I would like to see a few less capital letters and perhaps a little more punctuation. You usually can just type in lower case and backspace over the capital. It would make it a lot easier to read. Style too, is very individual and I like the poems I have read.
Thanks for sharing,
Lizbeth
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