Invisible

A poem I wrote that mimics how Taylor Swift felt in her song "Teardrops on my Guitar." I just liked the idea. Let me know how you like it!

I must have turned invisible.

Instead of running into

My arms,

You run past me,

Into hers.

You never realize

 How much

I care for you,

How much I

Like you.

You never realize

How often

Your image

Pops into my head

You never realize

How I cry

For you.

It seems that

You will never

Notice me,

And I hope

That changes.

Otherwise

I’ll just be watching

From the sidelines,

Waiting,

Hoping,

Praying

For a

Miracle.

 

Author's Note

A poem I wrote that mimics how Taylor Swift felt in her song "Teardrops on my Guitar." I just liked the idea. Let me know if you feel that I described her feelings accurately.

Reviews

[diggitydawg]

Hi it's Chloe this is an awesome poem!!!!!!!!! I was just about to write pudding instead of poem lol hahahahahahahahahahahahaha so yeah bye :D

[Ama May Cooper]

Sweet, very clear and simple message.
A little repetitive at parts and the emotion was hard to connect with but a nice and pleasant read all the same.

[Lonti Buzzfern]

That was beautiful. I really like the song personally and I do think the feelings are described accurately. Good job.

[writingcrazy55555]

Thank you! Yes it's a great song!