Depends on its mood swing

Cascade of my dream-
I let it flow, with the gentle breeze;
It may fly or may rest,
Or it may come to me;
With purity-
Insanity!
Or tears.
I let it be.

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

I love the way you put the first four lines. But the next four aren't as good as the first four. Nice though. Kudos.

I'd recommend :

Cascade of my dream-
I let it flow, with the gentle breeze;
It may fly or may rest,
Or it may come to me;
As pure,
Insane
Or with tears.
We shall see.

Keep writing.

[Tina Kline]

I love this, the words create a very beautiful image for me. It's like a jewel sparkling in the sun. And the meaning, for me, is special too.