Responsibility To Happiness!

Started my voyage to infinite completion,

Alone, friendless, perplexed.

I chose my own path; my own goal,

And I don’t regret.

I don’t fear losing all, neither perturbed.

And I am fine.

Am I?

Can I ignore what pricks my conscience?

Path is only mine- goal is what I crave for….

I never wanted to be alone, but I made myself so-

I made myself so to save my own, to save my soul;

Freedom, all what I wanted.

Paying for it.

Hey you all- I still feel joyance!!

This pain has, oh god! Can give me joyance…..

Did I sound weird?

May be, but letting me be happy was my decision-

And I am responsible to me.

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

A paradoxical start with "Infinite completion" (Somehow I feel it could've been the title). "Path is only mine- goal is what I crave for" - Well said, mate. Afterward to "Hey you all.." didn't align itself with the rest of the poem save the last line :-| Anyways, consider editing the poem. You have all the time in the world and all the words in the language :) Keep writing :)

[Tina Kline]

I like this poem as well. We are responsible for our own happiness because with self talk we can change how we view the things that happen to us. It's not easy, it takes a lot of work, but it can be done. Nicely done here.

[sumit]

thank u dinesh... "hey u all" was deliberate there.. i wanted to make everyone listen to me. thanks for ur advice... grammatical mistakes are also deliberate...