Frozen

He packed with him 

my muse,

my dreams, 

my heart 

and everything that belonged to him,

keeping for me our memories ...

as his last gift.

He said ‘adieu’ and went away... 

leaving me and my life

like a poem half written.

He never looked back,

while I still stand frozen at the door 

from where he left....

Reviews

[Vamsi]

perfect usage of simple words did all the magic..
expressing these feelings like love and pain needs great command over the language, and you have it didi..i feel happy for you

[Sumana]

thanks a lot brother for your encouraging words!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"While I still stand frozen at the door from where he left," loved this poem and line.

[Sumana]

thanks a lot!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

'Like a poem half written'.. Loved this phrase.
And how they say adieu leaving behind those memories for us to burn into...
Melancholic write.

[Sumana]

Thank you so much for your encouraging words!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Damien Ridge]

You described it beautifully. "Like a poem half written." We've all been through it, or at least most of us, just standing there wondering, "What do I do now? Everything was built around us and now there is only me..." Great poem, I enjoyed it!

[Sumana]

thank you so much! am glad that you enjoyed reading!