Tonight

Tonight...
My desires I will not restrain,
I will fall upon you as a monsoon rain,
Reviving you with my youthful green,
Unfolding hues that you have never seen.
Tonight...
I will let my veil of shyness drop,
and will not let my inhibitions stop
The river that flows in me,
Restlessly to be one with the sea.
Tonight...
My sea, I will drown in you,
Tonight I will touch you...
Tonight I will kiss you...
Tonight I will love you...
Like the way you always do.
Tonight I will be one with you.

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Very, very romantic! Tyfs!

[Sumana]

thanks a lot! :)

[emipoemi]

Wow! Very powerful, and quite poetic with strong imagery and good musicality. In a way this evokes the West Side Story song, but the passionate poetic quality is coming strongly from another angle. Well done!

[Sumana]

thank you so much for your encouraging words :)

[writ rajat]

very nice in your firt poem proud in being your first reviewer

[Sumana]

Thank you so much!glad you liked it!