Hai Friend

Hai Friend

Are you a wave or Tsunami???

I thought you as a gentle wave

Which soothes my mind & heart

I thought the wave touching my feet

 will make  me happy & joy

I was overwhelmed 

Felt the luckiest person

To have friend like you...

But

But

You ought to be a Tsunami...

Washed away everything

slowly breaking my beautiful house of love 

With patience, love & belief. 

I again built it back 

To a wonderful house of love

Then moved out of the shore

Thinking  you will not reach

But again you are coming

As a moon....

Or......????

Sujatha

Author's Note

This is first writing in writers forum... guide me.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Quite a poetry you've come up with. Both the "darkness of heart", and the "apocalypse of love" have you well pondered into these shades of heartfelt words, & of course, with your generous feelings toward love. Nice imagery here. Looking forward to reading your work!

[Suja]

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