Your Name

i see so many friends' names, five and eight at a time. every name sparks a wave of memories, both good and bad, brightly lit and darkly dimmed. they remind me of what i had, and could have again. only under the most meticulous circumstances though. ones i don't see happening anytime soon without a great cost of mental will. which i have very little of, and keep losing every day.

then i see your name, and the memories that go along with it. we were so in love, and greedy for it too. that was indeed our demise. there were no compatibility issues, as that seems to be the big thing to call it these days. we were perfect for each other in almost every way. even the things that weren't contributing aspects to our being together went well with us. we clashed in all the right ways, and connected in so many more.

while i think our time together was cut short, i'm not sure if there is any more of that to be had between us. however, i do feel there is something that has been left undone. as to what it is, i have no clue. so i'm going against my unorthodoxity and i'm going to keep you around, many have all ready left, and i must say you almost went with them. several times. but i'll fight against my will to push you away, in hopes it will do me some amount of good in the future, as i strongly feel it will. after all, you did give me the best summer of my life. surely you can give me more.

Reviews

[Cordelia Kaye]

This was a nice read, poetic even. Just remember to capitalize the beginning of sentences, your "I"s, etc. Otherwise, this was very good, it has a lot of emotion but keeps with its point.