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A Poem by Suitman
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I've been feeling a lot of emotional pressure for awhile now. The girl this is for seems to really lift the burdens off my heart.

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I long to hear you, say i love you.

Your sweet voice, upon my ear.

 

To feel you, touch my cheek.

Your soft hands, always being near.

 

For your eyes, to look in mine.

Infinately relieving me of my fears.

 

Your arms, wrapped around me.

No more will i sorrowfully tear.

 

 

 I long to sing to you my heart,

of a love so warm and dear.


To excite the bellows,

in the name of many. many future years.


 Take my hand, i'll lead you,

  through the steps with cheer.


And  with all of this i say to you,

"I love you, my dear."

© 2009 Suitman


Author's Note

Suitman
you might try putting a little bit more of a pause after the commas, and maybe a little more stress on the word before them. i hear and get the things of this poem every day, but never from the one i love. so their purpose is very important.

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Added on May 14, 2009
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