Missing You

Missing someone can be painful sometimes

 

It’s empty inside

And it feels real sore,

Life apparently

Has no meaning anymore.

 

There were two of me

One with you and without,

I loved my new self

Without the slightest doubt.

 

No sign of goodness

The whole world turned blue,

There is no distraction

When I'm missing you.

 

Sleep has no meaning

Words fail to convey,

What my heart desires

Is far far away.

 

Lonely rides are fun no more

The wind goes by and only in vain,

The empty rear seat behind me now

Only causes a whole lot of pain.

 

I’m as hopeless as can be

I’m a lonely pair-less shoe,

I’m a lock with no key

Because I need you.

 

I'm a tree without leaves

I'm a pen with no ink,

I'm a song without words

I’m useless, I can’t think.

 

There is no reason

To be happy and smile,

There is no color

It’s an unfair trial.

 

Because you're gone

There’s not much to do,

 

There’s just one me now.

 

The one that misses you.

Reviews

[paul]

'two of me' - great writing
many great lines and great flow too

[Samuel Dickens]

Such sad, lonliness! Hopefully, the one you loved returned before your heart broke in two.

[qaralynn]

I absolutely love this! great write! really emotional!

[Murtuza]

You've clearly let out your emotions in these lines. The metaphors used here are fantastic. My heart is touched on reading this poem. Excellently portrayed and well done!