Please Remember Me Now

Please Remember Me Now

where have you gone baby?

I'm waiting for you here

Where have you left me sweetie ?

I'm dying alone here ..

 

Why haven't you given me a last look?

Why haven't you let me hear your voice ?

Why haven't you written me the last letter ?

Why have you forgotten  me ?

 

The waves are dancing in front of my eyes

The birds are leaving above my head

The trees are saying goodbye for the last time

The soul is leaving for the first time...

 

Please, come back my love

Please, teach me how to live

Please, please, please, please...

Remember me now .....

25/5/2012

6:10 Pm

Author's Note

Im here ...remember me !!
I hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This poem speaks the desires of a lonely soul, and these are very intense emotions that you express through pen. I particularly loved that third stanza and how you proclaim that the 'trees are saying goodbye,' that was clever and intriguing indeed! Well done!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written, emotion filled words.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Yes so true, we remeber our love(s)....
but maybe you'll find another....
Good luck sis :D

[AK]

Wow! Brilliant poem! I love the emotions that it bears:) the title is wonderful! Keeo writing!

[khalid]

i really like it. it is very nice..so much feelings of love and passion as well as missing such a lover and bitterness of losing them...
i have really enjoyed reading it....
just; given not gave, written not wrote, forgotten not forget...you have little problem with present perfect and past participles..
thank you for sharing

[Sweets]

This is awesome D:
Full of emotions...so sad o.o
*hugs* hope you feel better soon nooboid =)