Traditions And Life

They were living in this simple farm

they used to wake up at dawn

and go to the meadows to look at its charm

they take a rest after they had a simple run..

 

 

They look towards the lush meadows

And begin praying to God leaving echoes

To give them their needs

And what they want from their seeds..

 

They carry their breakfast

And eat it under the trees

While enjoying the scene

Of those shy trees and banana trees

 

They stay there till the sun

Smiles for the from and hide its gun

behind the sea it try to run

After they kiss it a goodbye and leave with fun

 

They go back to their home

When they see the family gathered in that warm zone

Waiting for the big dad to reach home

To tell him their day stories and their dreams

 

He enters the house with a big smile

When they all approach to him not leaving any mile

And look at him as if he was away for a long time

They sit there to have that tasty meal..

 

After they waited for their dad

To feel with him the warmth and never feel sad

To taste with him the love ,life  and to be glad

They  see that warm feelings dancing around…

 

They sit together around the fire place

And begin telling their stories with no erase

They smile… Laugh ..hug .. and have best times

With their parents they share their days..

 

Before the days ends with  a big smile

They pray to God that big prayer

To make that smile the last style

And never make their love fade away..

 

They had this simple life

Where they try to revive

The warm heart with family and wife

 They were happier than having castles in such life …

Author's Note

This was for a school contest ..
What do you think about it ??

Reviews

[emman]

Nice! I liked it sooooooooooooooooooooo much! :)))))

[Sweets]

Awesomeness, that's so innocent :)

[Jeremy Baker]

Nice, solid structure and an refreshing message as well. Great work!

[Que]

I know you posted this ages ago...but how did the contest go? :)
Cheers!
[It's a really nice poem, by the way :)]

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Nicely constructed and interesting!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!

Great poem, lol i expect that you won the school contest

[Thea]

Wow! That was fantastic...This was totally a unique poem...The story was well made up as a poem...You did an excellent job here! Keep penning!
:)))

[Cassie Fraga]

a great poetic story... less is more... great value to have!! thank you for the great write!!

[SuicidePact.]

wow this was beautifully written