Please ..Be For Me

Please ..Be For Me

 

My heart want to speak

I want you to be unique

And never be freak

And try to give me a real peak …

 

I’m here alone walking between the trains

Looking for  you and on my head it rains

I feel the coldness moving between my veins

But your love is killing me with its chains…

 

I want to be feeling so fee

Will you come now with me

And let us forget the tree

That you let me under. Do you agree ?

 

There is nothing to say anymore

Here is my pen moving and knocking on your door

Will you open this time, or let me stay on the floor

Please baby .. Today let me score my last goal …

 

14/2/2012

Author's Note

I hope you like it :D

Reviews

[Black]

a wonderfull write, prolly one of your best,
the flow is better, though the emotion is still raw
i like the piece it has an edge

[jennifer little]

wonderful job keep up the good work

[Sahar moonlight]

This was really a very nice and honest poem. and i loved the rythme in each stanza!