Our breakup Anniversary ….

Our breakup Anniversary ….

It’s been one year man

Since the sin stopped smiling

And the earth stopped laughing

Can’t you recognize ..

Life tears  never stopped

From exactly one year …

 

It’s been one year man

Since my book begin burning

And didn’t turn into ach yet !!

Haven’t you feel my pain

And couldn’t you see my bloody rain??

Can’t you feel me man ?

 

It’s been one year man

Since you went away

And left me in my dangerous way

You left my hands alone

And threw me between the ocean arms

Without saving me when I was drowning !

 

It’s been one year man

Since my pen begin crying

And my heart started yearning

And my soul wants to leave me

Because it was only with me

Because I was with you and now you are gone ..

 

Man … One year have passed

But my love didn’t stop

Please change your mind

Because I’m here

Waiting for you …

1/3/2012 

Author's Note

It was yesterday ...
i hope you like it ....
Ignore grammar mistakes ..

Reviews

[Thea]

Aw, still waiting, huh...Your emotions are very well expressed here...I can still feel the hurt though one year had passed...Great job, my friend... :)))

[jennifer little]

great work

[Shy Girl]

He better be saying he's sorry after that gem of a piece. I really thought this line was stunning:
"It's been one year man
Since my pen began crying"
I really like it...a wonderful symbolism here. :)
I'm sorry though that you are feeling that way...both men and women can be just plain harsh to eachother.. :)