Our breakup Anniversary ….

Our breakup Anniversary ….

It’s been one year man

Since the sin stopped smiling

And the earth stopped laughing

Can’t you recognize ..

Life tears  never stopped

From exactly one year …

 

It’s been one year man

Since my book begin burning

And didn’t turn into ach yet !!

Haven’t you feel my pain

And couldn’t you see my bloody rain??

Can’t you feel me man ?

 

It’s been one year man

Since you went away

And left me in my dangerous way

You left my hands alone

And threw me between the ocean arms

Without saving me when I was drowning !

 

It’s been one year man

Since my pen begin crying

And my heart started yearning

And my soul wants to leave me

Because it was only with me

Because I was with you and now you are gone ..

 

Man … One year have passed

But my love didn’t stop

Please change your mind

Because I’m here

Waiting for you …

1/3/2012 

Author's Note

It was yesterday ...
i hope you like it ....
Ignore grammar mistakes ..

Reviews

[korbuda]

nice poem, I felt every emotion and it made me cry. well done

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

:( it waz sad but I loved it

[Sahar moonlight]

great emotions expressed nicely in your poem.
well, move forward. life never stops

[Tai Ryens]

This is full of emotion, strong ones in fact. I like how you say that your pen is crying, it's a nice play of words to make such a brilliant metaphor between your pen, a way of expressing yourself, and your emotions.
Stay strong. Keep it up~

[paradise]

very sad and emotional poem loved it keep going strong

[Cassie Fraga]

aaawww... the yearning in this is felt deeply... very well expressed sis!!
such a sad feeling that I can relate to... great write!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great poem...
and expressed real well....
I hope too he'll change his mind...

[khalid]

i think you have to move on. anyways, i think you need to correct some gramatical mistakes then it will be perfect poem like, havent you felt, instead of feel. great poem. wish next anniversity will be a poem about, i love again

[Becky Clancy]

Wow, thats really sad :( Your really good at expressing yourself ^^