Our breakup Anniversary ….

Our breakup Anniversary ….

It’s been one year man

Since the sin stopped smiling

And the earth stopped laughing

Can’t you recognize ..

Life tears  never stopped

From exactly one year …

 

It’s been one year man

Since my book begin burning

And didn’t turn into ach yet !!

Haven’t you feel my pain

And couldn’t you see my bloody rain??

Can’t you feel me man ?

 

It’s been one year man

Since you went away

And left me in my dangerous way

You left my hands alone

And threw me between the ocean arms

Without saving me when I was drowning !

 

It’s been one year man

Since my pen begin crying

And my heart started yearning

And my soul wants to leave me

Because it was only with me

Because I was with you and now you are gone ..

 

Man … One year have passed

But my love didn’t stop

Please change your mind

Because I’m here

Waiting for you …

1/3/2012 

Author's Note

It was yesterday ...
i hope you like it ....
Ignore grammar mistakes ..

Reviews

[Sleepless]

you are so sweet and caring if that jerk lieft then he is a jerk himself for losing you my father always says when someone walks away from your life then it means that the pain you feel for them is not really worth it because they lost you which was a big mistake love the poem suahd ! love your writing 1:) keep writing !:)

[AK]

Wow! This poem is wonderful! I really loved it! The sadness is overwhelming and the strength of the poem incredible. The emotions are laid heavily on the readers mind(and probably eyes too). On a whole, an absolutely stunning poem. Keep writing!

[emman]

hey man..hey man..hey man..OMG! that man is a deaf..nice poem :) I mean ANOTHER EXCELLENT POEM..I love the emotions..a combination of sadness and hope..Are you still hoping for that guy?

Hey! you need to SMILE..just like this.. :)))))))))))))))).. I call EVERLASTING SMILE :)

[SuicidePact.]

wow this was a very strong poem

[Jeremy Baker]

Hopefully this isn't true for you, but if it is you need to move on. Strong write.

[Senseless whatever]

Powerful, strong and sad write. Time.

[Sunflower]

this is very sad, im sorry to hear how much pain you feel even after its been a year

[Sweets]

The picture is so sad T__T
This is very heartbreaking =/
I hope he comes back to you.
But just look around and you'll see how many people still love you :)
AND ONE OF THEM IS MEEEEEEEEE =D
*hugs*

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

my fav stanza was the second to last one...
and yes, this is truly a heartfelt piece

i like this!!!!!!!!!!