Hey Man ..I’m here

Hey Man ..I’m here

 

Hey can you reach my heart

Man can you see me here

Will you put me in your love chart

Or just leave me in the nowhere …

 

Man I really sacrificed a lot

More than you think I did

But you always saw me as a black spot

Can you please make me your new thread…

 

Man I love you please feel me

I’m walking in the sorrow road

And no one is looking at me

Please give me the chance to be your bride …

 

Here I am man standing here

Beside the sea

And above the mountains

I’m here waiting for you …

 

Would you come today

Or will you let me wait

Be sure that I’m here

Loving you more everyday ….

 

I Adore You

6:50 PM

18/2/2012

Author's Note

I hope you like it :D

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"Hey can you reach my heart
Man can you see me here
Will you put me in your love chart
Or just leave me in the nowhere …"
The first three lines in this stanza sounded like a song to me :D Which really aided the reading and that's most writers goals :D Congrats on achieving that!

"Here I am man standing here
Beside the sea
And above the mountains
I’m here waiting for you …"

Such emotion from you in this one...overflowing no matter the place, circumstance etc...very powerful!

~M.Babu~

[Sleepless]

i did ! i did ! i loved it !!!!!! the poem is really sweet :P!!!! love it suahd keep writing !:)

[emman]

Wow! nice poem! I love all the lines,,full of emotions..I almost cried :(

But wait.......SMILE! :))))

[Mohamed Hani]

Excellent... Simply excellent

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

so much emoitin all expressed in a poem ehancing job

[Shy Girl]

You sound as if you're standing there with your hands cupped around your mouth while trying to get this person's attention. (kinda like a shouting echo) and he ain't getting it clearly enough.. It was very heartfelt and kept that feeling through out. A nice piece :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice piece showing your unbreakable loyalty- an excellent trait to have

[khalid]

really very nice poem, hope it isnt written to a deaf

[Jeremy Baker]

Very romantic and I can feel the sweet longing form here!