Valentine’s Day (Editing)

Red flowers are everywhere

Those hearts are here and there

Teens like ants looking for a star

To give for their beloved in a garden or a car..

 

The sky’s cheeks are blushing in that day

Wearing its red dress and its own spray

The world’s eyes are looking at the people who are in a try

To impress the ones they love; and make them never cry.

 

I look at this life with my red eyes

Which are trying to hide my past tries

From the one who left me alone and never stays

And didn’t try to make me feel the beauty of such days…

 

I think surely I will stay alone in that day

In a garden where they meet and till the morning they stay

But my vision is teary , and the picture is grey

They are all here but no one look or even say “hey”…

 

For my mysterious here :

“please be here next valentine, cause being alone in such a day hurts “…….. 

Author's Note

I will be studying in that day cause i have exams :p
better that watching movies and crying looool :D
I hope you like it better that before one....

Thank you so much :)

Reviews

[Sleepless]

well valentines day what did i do in valentines day oh yeah i watched romantic movies im a sucker for those lol but i love the poem i love the flow youc anjust read the sentneces so smoothly that i felt everything everything is beautiful keepw writing ! :P

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

aaaaaw lovely

[Desmund Tiny]

You did an awesome job here.... I love the flow and its emotions ......

[EMF]

A superb poem with great flow, as usual. A sublime poem my friend

[Cassie Fraga]

wow!!! great write I appreciate such flow!! you did an awesome job with this one!!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

make it "being alone *on* such a day hurts"
"The sky’s cheeks are blushing *on* that day"
and "I think surely I will stay alone *on* that day"
and "They are all here but no one look*s* or even say*s* “hey”…"
The poem was good! Keep it up!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A truly brilliant poem...
and flow is awesome...and wow love your ryhming too....
all in all a wonderful read....
And valentines day/approach to it does make you think more...
Top poem :)