Valentine’s Day

Valentine’s Day

A Poem by stars are far

Valentine’s Day

 

Red flowers are everywhere

Those gifts are here and there

That girl talking with her boy

Asking him for a red thing he can buy.

 

The sky is smiling for that day

Wearing its red dress and its own spray

The world thinks that people are all happy

But it doesn’t see the ones who cry …

 

I see all of that and I’m sure I will be alone

I have no one to make me feel home

To make me live that beauty

And give me those red flowers ..

 

In that day I will stay alone

Watching those romantic movies

Of lovers ,and wishing for one in my home

But in that day I will be waiting alone..

 

FOR THE NEXT VALENTINE

AS I EVERY VALANTINE SAY :
“NEXT YEAR IM SURE THAT YOU WILL BE HERE “

BUT BADLY YOU ARE NEVER HERE ……

© 2012 stars are far


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I hope you like it .....
I will edit that later :)
But please honest opinions .....

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I'm dating myself every valentine's day..gosh! its 50% fun and 50% lonely..I call it BALAnCE :) well let us just smile always, no need to rely our happiness to other people..Basically, it comes from the inside :) nice poem! I like so much :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really liked this, I think this is my favourite out of the few of your poems I just read today :)
It has a sadness to it but nonetheless has a sort of 'innocent' aura to it. Don't know if that makes sense, haha.
I just found one thing that you could maybe fix (if you want, of course):
"I have no one to make me feel home" adding an at in "feel at home". I think it makes a little more sense :)
Cheers!

Posted 12 Years Ago


great epic lovely

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great write.
The feeling of loneliness knowing that others are into each others is defenitely very terrible feeling, but hopefully you WILL have him next year :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I know that feeling!!! uwaaahhhh this one made me cry so hard.... >.< I love it.......

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. I know the feeling! I've never had a Valentine...but then, I've never really been that big on the day either so what can I say?
Truly sad yet heart wrenching

Posted 12 Years Ago


really very nice writing suhad although you are going to make me lose my sight cuz of the font you are using.
hope you all the best always
go ahead, young poet

Posted 12 Years Ago


The sad thing about Valentine's Day is in this poem and it is nicely told. This is a totally sad piece but I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"In that day I will stay alone
Watching those romantic movies
Of lovers ,and wishing for one in my home
But in that day I will be waiting alone.."...this was painful...my heart goes out to you through your lines...great try!



Posted 12 Years Ago


i can so relate to thi yep ill find myself watching omantic movies and wondering when that mystery guy will appear but pretty good suhad !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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