Don’t Break My heart

Don’t Break My heart

 

Don’t leave me alone

Cause the coldness of winter hurts

Keeps it here and never try to disappear

Without you my life have no meaning at all…

 

I can you see your pain

That you want to deny

And every beautiful moment

I will revel it to the world …

 

Never think…Never think

I will never  let you fall

Just always make me your goal

And the one you wish to own …

 

Never think…Never think…Never think

Never think I will let you fall …

 

If you don’t see me as a star

Then be sure   you are a blind

I give you myself ,I give you my soul

Cause you are the one

This star wants to own …

 

Never let me feel the cold

And make the sky cry on me

Just hold me tight tonight

And don’t break my heart at all..

 

 

Don’t leave me alone

Cause the coldness of winter hurts

Keeps it here and never try to disappear

Without you my life have no meaning at all…

 

 

Just always make me your goal

And the one you wish to own …

 

11.1.2012

5:32 PM

Suhad

Author's Note

This poem took me the longest time I took to write it , from all of my poems this took me about 35 minutes, but I like it …
I hope you also do :D
enjoys as much as you can :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Beautiful work. The time you take to write poems is so short, haha, I usually take a good 10 minutes per stanza, just looking for a good word or a line that sounds amazing. I love the flow in this, and I love the way the words just fall into place. This is one of the best poems from you I've yet to read, keep up the hard work, and never stop writing!

[Senseless whatever]

Beautiful and heartfelt. You weave a tapestry of words that pull at the heart.

[Layla Anne Massaro]

I think this was the greatest piece I have read from you. Well done.

[Parashar]

really well written

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful.. so sad...indeed..

I love it though!! =)

hmmm it reminds me of how some relationships are... mmm well nicely done! You capture a lot of emotions in this piece. =)

[Sahar moonlight]

a perfect heart speaking.
awesome poem Suhad

[Warren L.G De Mills]

:( this was sad. I read this at a point in time when I am missing my girlfriend right now and reading this did nothing to make me feel better. That means it was an effective piece. Good job

[Thea]

So beautiful...I can see the love and passion in this poem...A very romantic and great poem...I like it!!!
:)))

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooohhhh!!! strong ending!! love it fah real!!
**keep that ink flowin**

[EMF]

Beautiful just that. In fact this may be one of the best of yours I have ever read.