Miracle ages

Miracle ages

 

I thought that the age of miracles is gone

But today a miracle from the old ages

Ran toward my arms

And hugged me tight…

 

He came …He was here !!!

He came to say goodbye !

He came ….He was here !!

Oh My Gosh ….He is great !

 

I couldn’t stop staring at him

I couldn’t take my eyes

From his glittery ones and cherry lips

I couldn’t hold myself …He was great !

 

I was ready to beg under his knees

To tell me he loves me

But all what he’d  done is tease me

But it was amazing cause he was he !!

 

But now he is gone away

And my thoughts changed

Miracle age is back today

And made me see the one who I’d never hate ..

 

Man just take care

From wherever you are

And always be sure that

I adore you

 

9/1/2012 

Author's Note

for my real love ......
I hope you are happy from where you are :)

Enjoy that people ..

Reviews

[khalid]

that is really nice but love can never be begged. and better if you used he has gone instead of he is gone

[Chrissy]

beautiful

[Senseless whatever]

Great write. I can feel your excitement and hear your heart pounding. Very nice.

[M.Babu]

There is such a pep-in-step tinge in this piece...

Nicely done!!

~M.Babu~

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This poem's optomistic ring is a nice touch.

:D

[Sleeping Maiden]

Such a cute piece. I loved it. Very enjoyable to read. Just lovely..

[Parashar]

very sweet poem ......

[Sahar moonlight]

very nice poem you wrote.

[Warren L.G De Mills]

aw that was cute lol. Nice piece . So many people are too immature in the love for someone that they often fail to realize that love is something that sets people free, you have been able to realize that and be content that that person is happy wherever he is. I admire that. Good job

[Cassie Fraga]

its always good when you can leave it right.... and it sounds like you did!! very nice job sis!!