The Thief Love

He loved her

She did too

But the problem is

They forgot everything

Just there love was all the things..

 

She forgot our friendship

And when I used to hug her

And tell her

You will find someone..

 

But now all what she do

Is look at me

And say :”who are you ?”

I answer sadly :

”I’m the one that was always behind you “..

 

I just walk on and see him there

The one that always look at me

And hold me in my sad times

He looked at me like I was a part of the moving air.

 

I stood there behind a tree

And looked toward this big city

And shouted till I was tired

I said everything in my heart and mind ..

But I was sure that no one was listening.

 

He and she went away

Without telling me anything from that day

They traveled to another country and lived there

And now I have no friends or even my babe .

 

Now everything in this world

Just move so fastly

And don’t look behind

It step on someone’s hearts

To complete two.

But I’m sure baby

I will never be with you ..

Author's Note

I just wrote that ,it is obvious i think from all the mistake ..
I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Thea]

That's so hurtful... :(
But anyway, I love this...Great poem!
:)))

[Inyourshadow]

A love that breaks a heart and a friendship is a terrible thing, the screaming at the city is my favourite part, very emotional.
Keep em' coming

[Arielle Ann]

this was sad... loved the title ... seemed like a thief stole away your love...

[Lily Mae]

Very heartbreaking.. and yet well penned emotions..xo

[nevermindfan1991]

A wonderful yet sad poem about losing the once special people in your life. I've been there. It really sucks and all you can do is think about the happy times you had and what you did wrong. Lovely write. Great Job! If you can, please rate/review my most recent poem. Please and thank you!

[Tai Ryens]

Nice story to this poem. Sad concept, but I'm sure a lot of us have to go through it some time or another. Nice job, keep it up.

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

it was great loved it

[Leave me alone....]

nice, really heart reneging. I'm sure a lot of people can relate.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice story in here!

but I found a grammar mistake here:
Just [their] love was all the things..

[JRB]

nicely put keep up the writes