I Tried A Lot …But Life Stopped Me

I Tried A Lot …But Life Stopped Me

 

Trying to hold memories

But they scatter all around

Like papers in a windy day ..

 

Trying to keep my smile

But it fade away

With the leave of autumn..

 

Trying to stare at you forever

But the fog of winter

Steel you from between my eyes...

 

Trying to face the truth

But when I look I feel blind

And now i knew that it is hidden

Between the leaves of the trees ...

 

Trying to say :"I love thee "

But the silence of the night

Make me feel so shy ..

 

Trying to capture every beautiful moment

But the darkness of the night

Stopped me and made the blank ...

 

I tried so many things

But life stops me

And you want you did too ....

Author's Note

Just for him ..
Hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Ysabel Reyes]

awww this is very sweet! I love it. this could be a lovely lullaby.

[Undying Glory]

super sweet and very very good :) and really sad too i must admit. this was heartfelt and beautiful work!! :)

[nancy.sedky]

Heart written, keep it up

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

This is beautiful!

[Dove]

This is a beautiful and passionate poem. I truly did enjoy reading this. The first two stanzas are the ones that touched me the most. This is a fantastic piece of writing.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the title and the theme, a nice,gentle text that speaks out what many people
live through. Well done.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the repetition makes this poem even more intense and passionate!
nice

[Ami N.]

Nicely written. There were several grammar mistakes that you might want to fix, but otherwise it was great! :)

[JRB]

nicely put keep up the writes

[Desmund Tiny]

a heart breaking poem ... I like the first stanza.... I love this poem.... great piece.