Let me do it ..

Let me do it ..

 

Let me swear by the sun and the moons

That I love you .

 

Let me travel to Mars and Jupiter

To write on them that I miss you.

 

Let me blow the wind to your side

And send the best Love message.

 

Let me keep this small secret between you and me

The secret of love and hope.

 

Let me be yours forever

And I will carry you

To the last ocean in the earth ..

 

This is all because

I MISS YOU

Author's Note

Again for Mr.~s~ :P
Hope you like it :D

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow! so passionate! I love the "love" in this piece. so sweet... =D
Inspiring poem!! ^-^ Enjoyed this soo much.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A lovely romantic poem...flow is perfect too...
all in all it is a perfect piece of poetry...
well done again :)

[Tai Ryens]

This has many wonderful thoughts of love behind these words of wisdom. It's very straightforward with the meaning and the flow was nice and simple. Love can be really inspiring sometimes, I can see it in this poem. Wonderful write.

[EMF]

A beautiful poem. Simple and straightforward. Wonderful write

[Thea]

Oh...Mr. ~s~ again? :)))
Such love made you write a really beautiful poem!
I like it! You did great!
:)))

[Arielle Ann]

cute sweet and lovely :)