Let me do it ..

Let me do it ..

A Poem by stars are far

Let me do it ..

 


Let me swear by the sun and the moons

That I love you .

 

Let me travel to Mars and Jupiter

To write on them that I miss you.

 

Let me blow the wind to your side

And send the best Love message.

 

Let me keep this small secret between you and me

The secret of love and hope.

 

Let me be yours forever

And I will carry you

To the last ocean in the earth ..

 

This is all because

I MISS YOU

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Again for Mr.~s~ :P
Hope you like it :D

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beautiful one

Posted 12 Years Ago


so much emotion in such simplicity... NICELY DONE SIS!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice :) Meaningful piece. Loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This piece is so sweet. The love is well expressed in each lines that makes this poem wonderful... I love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow..!!! Good show..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


That is so sweet. Love is really great. You showed how great it is in this poem.


Posted 13 Years Ago


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JRB
love how sweet, to love, be loved and to give love, nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


very beautiful and emotional

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago



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