Never

Never

 

"Never trust your dreams"

My heart screamed in loud

"Never believe in thoughts"

My mouth revealed this truth

"Never look toward the past "

My mind said in that day

"Never believe in love"

My soul said while dying..

 

But none of my senses said

To never trust you

Because they never felt my pain

Author's Note

I hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Kim's Poems]

I enjoyed the honesty of this piece, wonderful write.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Wow! This is great! This one reminds me of lupines.

[Ami N.]

Wow. Honestly, this was just great. Beyond criticism. I love your poems and this one was fantastic :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Great,loved the question and answer format, a clever poem in dialog form that shows you to be a young talented poet.Lots of tempo.Well done.

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

This is raw and good!
However you can stive a lil harder, always!
You should try to enhance your vocabolary skills.
They will provide you with a variety of proper words.
Overall it was good....
PS. Never mind me...

[victoria]

loved this

[Tai Ryens]

This was really interesting. Very emotional, too. This was cleverly put together, how you don't trust anything else besides your significant other. It's a very simple, and shall I say brilliant poem. Wonderful job, keep it up!

[paradise]

Short but seems to have many words behind it well done love it :)

[Andrea Vargas]

Interesting.. I'm getting a sence of longing and pain in this piece.. Good write

[Arielle Ann]

wow the end was unique....never to stop trusting is it? none of the senses can comprehend it! awesome!