Sweet Forever

Sweet Forever

 

When your body

Comes into its final grave

With the first gate

Which belong to me

That oblige you

To give up your sweet things ...

 

Your first and last kiss I get

It was just mine,

But then while moving toward

Your last destiny

You can't along

Except if I killed you

By my strongest bones

And all your parts

Fall apart ...

 

You made me feel

The best in life

You give me too

The most Hermon I need

Oh, my chocolate bar

You were so sweet

Before and after your rest

In my biggest grave ...

Author's Note

I'm sure you didnt know what I'm talking about before i said that :P

hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Poetry is art great job.

[Shy Girl]

Chocolate...always a great muse for a poem or short story :) Very nice. I liked it very much (your poem and chocolate..lol) Had me till the last line, loved the thought out process you used to intrigue your reader. :)

[Andrea Vargas]

Lovely poem (:

[Dayran]

An accurate account of the ' final destiny,' or thereabout. An insightful poem.

[paradise]

Nice i like it

[Sweets]

Awesomeness, that reminds me...I bought galaxy caramel yesterdayyy =D
but I already ate it -.-
lol, awesome poem =3
we all love chocs! :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So love this...
And loved the Jabal el-Shaykh reference :P
And yeah..eat chocolate at night too....it's even better then :P

Excellent work :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[khalid]

so nice and really expressing deep feeling and takes reader to many probabilities in what you mean by it.
i really like it