I wish you were real

I wish you were real

 

Every day I wait for you

But our chat lasts for one hour

and few minutes more .

I haven’t known you

From a long time

But your heart

Was like my home.

 

I've seen you

Just one time

But when I saw you ,

All of the bills were paid

The bills of friendship between us .

Your eyes were sparkling

Like the stars of the night

your smile killed me

It was like the lonely moon .

 

That black shirt

oh, I really loved

You were the one

That I was waiting to see .

With all my heart I say:

"you are perfect "

Believe this now .

 

I want our friendship

To last forever

I wish you were real

To hold you

And imprison you

Between my eyes .

 

But I hope for you to find

That special girl

That steel you

And prison you

In her heart

And pay for you

The bills of love .

 

Good Luck My Friend

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Author's Note

For the light in my dark
For the moon between the stars
For the friend that means a lot
For you my perfect friend .

Hope you all like it .

Reviews

[Etoiles]

Very sweet

[Cassie Fraga]

I loved it.... very deep with give and take... nicely done!!

[Jennifer]

I love it

[Dove]

Beautifully written and I love the font of the words. Of course I also love the color. Full of emotions and that always makes a piece of writing cool.

[khalid]

i really like it. so simple and at the same time full of feelings

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Very nicely done!
It had a rhythmic flow!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very sweet. Beautifully penned!

[paradise]

I liek it alot great job :)

[marybeth davis]

well i love it, very well written but you "from" meaning "for" but that is okay because it seems like it just flows with the poem