I’m Not Asking For too much ….

I’m Not Asking For too much ….

 

I don’t care how do you look

Or how old your style is.

I don’t mind how careless you are

Or how crazy you act.

 

I just want you to be mine

Not matter how do you look

Or how do you want to be,

I’m sure that I’m not a beauty queen

But I’m someone

Who really loves you

And cares for you.

 

You have never been my knight

But you are my guardian angel

And I believe in that .

 

You are not a singer

But when you will sing

Just for me

I will feel that your voice

Is coming from the sky .

 

And man.

I know that you don’t like me now

But I’m not asking for so much

That is what you think

But in my vision

I’m asking for a pearl

From the middle of the ocean.

 

And man .

Don’t you remember

When you said you love me

And nothing will separate us

No matter for what we pass through

I promised that even oceans

Will not separate us .

 

But my love.

Your promises were gone with the wind

And ripped under the ice

In the ice ages

But mine

Were still itched in the stone

Beside the shore

Waiting for you to come back

And you haven’t come yet .

Are you planning to come back

Or you want to disappear forever.??

Just because I love you

I’m not asking for that big thing

I’m asking to get YOU.

 

9:24 PM

2/12/2011

Suhad

Author's Note

I hope he understand one day and come back to me :(
Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

This is beautiful ! (: lovely

[Kim]

Such a wonderful write here, full of emotion.

[Thea]

Aw! This is so sweet though there are some points that it appears sad...Such love can make someone feel like this! >,<
Great work!
:)))

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely piece..!!!!

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

IT'S [personnal.

[Arielle Ann]

nice flow of words....gushed out in one rush I think !

[Dove]

I really like the colors, because I'm a colorful person. The thing I like most about this poem is how the emotions fit so perfectly in tone with this poem. The flow was nice and smooth. Awesome!

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Completely in the poem...Well done!!

[Tai Ryens]

The emotions flow nicely with the poem. Excellent expression lies in this poem, it must really hurt waiting for someone to take you back when you know in your mind they probably never will. The colours kind of threw me off track, but I managed to kind of keep my mind focused. Wonderful job!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love how the colors convey the poem's meaning