Waiting For The Meet

Waiting For The Meet

Can't wait to see your eyes

And to feel your sweet embrace

Few more days

And your mirage will be true

My dream will become alive

And the flowers of the spring

Will appear in winter ...

 

I can't wait to feel the cold

Between your arms

And see the bright

In the middle of the night .

 

I'm preparing myself  for the meet

Baby. My make-up is ready

My pink shirt too

My black pant is cleaned

So is my boots .

 

Sweet heart.

My heart is beating so hard

While being more closer for the meet

Man,

I'm ready to see you

Are you too?

Author's Note

I'm so ready !! Hope to see you soon :)

this piece might not be good by i wrote that in English period :D
Enjoy :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I think this is an excellent piece...really show the readiness of yourself for him so well....and describes those moments that girls go through real well....and the question at the end (I'm ready to see you....Are you too?) is the perfect way to end a great poem...well done :)

[korbuda]

I know what it is like to wait and to be ready to meet someone very special. in this poem I saw a real emotion. Well done.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I love it! I don't know why, but, for some reason, it reminds me of the iris flower.

[khalid]

it is nice but, what do you mean by; i cant wait to feel the cold between your arms? i think it should be, to feel the warmth, isnt it?

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Another nicely written poem. Completely wrote by heart!!

[screamin'ian]

yeah, i'm ready! definitely conveys the mood.

[Dreamer]

The simplicity is wht catches me :) Simply revealing emotions that we can all relate to :) good write

[Cassie Fraga]

sweet lovely and simple... awesome!!!!

[Ami N.]

Aww. It's so sweet :) Nice job!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

oh oh oh!
i can feel your anticipation here!

[Sleeping Maiden]

So adorable!!! =) Lovely write! I loved it. I enjoyed reading this. ^o^