It won’t start

It won’t start

 

Every day I wake up

I imagine you by my side

I look out of my window

And see all the trees

Smiling for a new day .

Then I became sure

That you are looking at them

From behind the non-shining sun ..

 

I look at your picture so deep

And kiss it, as if it was you .

I smeel your best perfume

As if I was breathing your love .

And then I wait for you

Before I wash my face ,Brush my teeth

Have my breakfast ,

I wait to talk with you ..

 

I wait with all my scenes

And I feel that

You are everything I live for .

Here your call,

It came to me

Like water in the middle of the desert .

 

I feel your sweet words

I taste your beautiful voice

And I live for that "I Love You " word ...

 

OH, baby

This is the way

How my day start

And you can see

That without you

It won't begin ..

Author's Note

For that special person :)
Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Well, it's quite obvious that you're in love with someone. It's a sweet poem, really, a hint of beauty too, but I feel that you could tap into your emotions quite deeper than this gets into them. You're capable of writing with deeper emotions, I know it, all you need to do is tap into them. Good write!

[*[_Natasha_]*]

excellent, love this one :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

SIMPLY LOVE YOUR CHOICE OF PICTURE!!!!!!!!!
my fav one from you
:)

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

OMG!!! Love it so much!!It's so sweet!

[screamin'ian]

just like all your love poems, very emotionally expressive

[Dove]

This is a very romantic poem. Great job!

[Andrea Vargas]

This was nice (: it sounds like a song

[khalid]

very romantic and nice, well done

[Arielle Ann]

so beautiful...n a bit sad :(

[Candy]

It's clear that you're are deeply in love. I like that I feel that. But otherwise, it's not something I would read.. :( But it's a sweet poem, and really cute.. But I believe you have to go more deep in the feelings.
Keep writting, best wishes :*