Men Tears

Men Tears

A Poem by stars are far

Men Tears

 

I always see

In my dreams and day ones

That boys hurt and move on

They just kill your heart

And destroy your life

Forever and they don't mind ...

 

But you were different

You kissed my heart

And hugged it a lot

But i told you go away boy

Because of a lie .

 

But for the first time

I knew that boys or men

Which you belong to.

You changed my thoughts

To say that

"Men Really Cry "

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
I Dont think that men would cry cause i think that NOT all of them feel ...But i think that some would for a girl =/

Hope you like it :)


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To tell the truth, I feel men are more emotionally vulnerable...well thats my point f view...however coming back to the poem, a man cries for that one lady whom he really cares for! it would require the greatest emotion to make a man show n shed tears...wonderful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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To tell the truth, I feel men are more emotionally vulnerable...well thats my point f view...however coming back to the poem, a man cries for that one lady whom he really cares for! it would require the greatest emotion to make a man show n shed tears...wonderful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm,i'm doubtful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I've never been afraid to cry, even when others brand me a wuss if I do. It's a great release of pain or joy and in reality, only the strongest man will ever cry, especially for a girl. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never been afraid to cry as I feel tears are a great release of pain, joy, you pen your piece with great insight as some men/boys feel vunereable crying and that's a pity. Keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


it was very heart-touching story, I agree that men cry and their tears are more painful. good job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


yes.... some of the strongest men do cry for a girl... this I know...
Great read!!
write, write on...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh yes....some men are cold...some are warm, just like women....it's all about finding that special one...keep searching and you'll find him...he might be someone you already know :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So touching... And yeah... Men cry too...
Deep poem, and very well written!

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, so touching and such an amazing write. Such depth.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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