You are my everything

You are my everything

 

I couldn’t believe

That you are saying this ....

"I mean everything to you "

Oh. I’m sure you are my everything too...

 

You are saying that :

"Many's are like you

But there is only one like me "

you said that

I'm perfect

But i think that

You haven’t looked at yourself before saying that....

 

I can't wait anymore

To talk with you

Or to find you on

Just to tell you that

"I love you"

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

its simple yet lovely :) everyday words each lover says to the other...but to comprehend it truly "when some one says- you are my everything", is not that easy..but your understanding has been reflected so beautifully!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice perspective on this famous phrase...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..!!!

[Dove]

Someone is sailing into the sea of romance lol. Another fantastic poem.

[Andrea Vargas]

interesting and lovely

[khalid]

you are sinking in the sea of romance, nice poem

[Shy Girl]

A true romantic you are my dear. I could feel the hope and emotion you thought through each line. The word choices placed are beautiful, makes us all want to be hopeful romantics again :) Thank you for a wonderful read :)

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

well-written

[Thea]

So sweet and beautiful...
The ending is just moving...
Very well written, Suhad...I like this... :)))