Best Birthday Ever

Best Birthday Ever

 

Since I woke up this day

I was thinking of you

You spread those spicy peppers on it

And make it all chillin ..

 

It's my best birthday

Cause one year before i didnt know you

It was just me

Stuck in the bloody river of pains ...

 

That "good morning"

I will never forget

Till the last word

After 8 hours of chat

without getting bored or sad

Just smiles and laughs t

till my "goodbye " appears

I said that

But my heart didn't ...

 

I can't stop thinking about you

And how you made my day

I will never forget this birthday

Just because

           you printed your words in it ...

Author's Note

I wrote this on my birthday 11/11/2011
But now i got time to type it ..written for a very special person ...
hope you like it ;)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So love this poem and the tempo is spot on....and some birthdays always stick out and be memorable because of a special person.... Love the terrific ending which captures the moments

"I can't stop thinking about you
And how you made my day
I will never forget this birthday
Just because you printed your words in it"

Beautiful poem and may your future birthdays be even more memorable and enjoyable :)

[screamin'ian]

happy belated birthday!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!

[Andrea Vargas]

happy belated birthday!

[khalid]

i really like it

[Dove]

Beautiful poem. The flow of this piece made it enjoyable for the reader to read.

[Undying Glory]

this was so good, i really loved this one, this was very sweet work. this just proves how the simplest things in life have the deepest impacts on people, and even more so on a birthday.

"I can't stop thinking about you
And how you made my day
I will never forget this birthday
Just because
you printed your words in it ..."
what a great ending. nice work!!

[EMF]

Simply wonderful. You have a perfect beat and flow here. I love every line, every beat. Superb work.

[Ashley Brodber]

Wow, just wow!

[Thea]

This is such a beautiful poem, Suhad...
You worked on this well...
:)))

[Tai Ryens]

Could've used just a tiny bit of work, and proofreading. I loved the last stanza the most, that part was just lovely. The second to the last stanza explains a lot of conversations, haha, starts with 'good morning' and ends with 'farewell', in my opinion, a farewell from someone like that usually means they're gonna sleep, so it might as well be a day to night conversation. Great work!