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We have reached too far by this

You must leave and forget

And I should walk and ignore ...

 

Our meeting from beginning was wrong

We changed in some months

And our relation become so strong

Our love grew up fastly

So as our dreams ...

 

This is why I must leave

And make your life as it was before me

And I'm sure you'd be better  this way

I will just go

And leave you. I’m sorry ...

 

But hey, look at the bright side

You will be again free

As you used to say

"I'm happily single "

You will re-be

 

And man,

Sorry for being dreamy

But I thought that I own you

For now I must say" move on "

And I will too ...

 

Just look beside you

You'll find her

Who loves you really

Not like me ...

 

If you want to be good with me

Be with her now

And I will be okay .

For now,

I must say Goodbye ...

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[EMF]

Truly wonderful. Each time, just better and better. I begin to get lost in your words

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice flow

[Thea]

So wonderfully written, Suhad...
I like it...
:)))

[Tai Ryens]

Very nicely written with some sort of expression behind these words. Wonderful, but sad that some people really have to undergo this feeling. It should be a feeling that no one should feel, but it's sad that some people should go through this. Great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very nice poem, written with terrific passion, excellent writing :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Love this! It's so good. I love how it's not totally sadistic as some poems turn out. =) I like how there's hope and like it's not the end of the world thing you know with relationships. So, nicely done! I love these lines:

But hey, look at the bright side
You will be again free
As you used to say
"I'm happily single "
You will re-be

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I like this, it gies hope. So very nicely written and expressed. Love the word "re-be" Awesome write!