I Don’t Want You Any more

 

you knocked on my door

With the complication that was drown

Obviously on your face..

I was crying one yesr over you

But man ! I was shocked by your question

You want me back

But I’m so deeply hurt

How would that work between us ?

Love is not just a word or apology

It is a laugh over this life

And one step with two people holding each other

With love and honesty they walk ...

 

I couldn't say a thing

When i saw you in front of me

But i saw all my past pictures vivid .

And my only soul was yearning ..

 

I couldn't think about any word

But I must say it

With my crying voice

But strongly and loud

GO AWAY

CAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU ANYMORE

Author's Note

When you feel that the person you love is coming to you back while you feel that he is obliged to ...
you can't say except GO AWAY ..

Hope you like this ...

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

As Chris down there says, there's quite a bit of spelling and grammar errors in this piece to truly enjoy. The grammar errors could be exempted I guess, well, in my opinion because sometimes even I ignore the rules of grammar when poem writing, but the spelling errors, specifically the past tense words, could use some proof reading. It detracted me from the poem a bit, but at least I could understand a bit of it.
It's a great poem despite all that, and it's quite sad that sometimes the people you love only come back when you're far over them. Adequate job here, just work a bit harder next time.

[khalid]

sorry to tell you about some mistakes but im sure that you understand i say that cuz i know ur really great writer, hurt not hurted but the most i liked is, love is a laugh over life

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great shot..!!

[Dove]

Wow! I love the message that was recieved through this poem. This piece of writing is powerful and STAY STRONG! Great poem!

[Andrea Vargas]

This seemed like it was wroten in angry, i think you should take a step back and look through this poem again and see if you can make it flow better (: Good Luck and keep writing (:

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice strong message here.

[Desmund Tiny]

It has a very powerful message....
I know how it feels and it's really hard when you already moved on and now he's coming back..... he's too late......

so sad but great write

[Cassie Fraga]

very powerful message here... awesome of you to stay strong. keep ur heard up the strong only get stronger... thanx for sharin!!

[Sweets]

Awesomeness, omg and it's so true...Anger takes place when a loved one comes back after breaking your heart :)
Such a wonderful poem nooboid D: