I'm waiting for you ....

Every word you said to me

Every tear you shade for me

Every "I love you "  i heard from you..

 

I cant erase ..

I won't forget ..

I will ignore...

 

The sky is cry today

Cause it is the first year without you

It is the first winter

Your heart is not with me ...

 

Can you hear the thunder too

This is the voice of my heart

Crying and spreading the voice so loud ...

 

Baby. when you decide to come back

My arms would be opened widly for you

And my eyes would be waiting in passion to meet yours ...

 

But man! when you look today for the window

Remember this inocent girl

That loved you madly once

And waiting for you today and tomorow and everyday ..

Author's Note

Hope you like it ..
and im still waiting for you ...

Reviews

[khalid]

it is nice, but what do you mean the sky is cry?

[Andrea Vargas]

Just Lovely (:

[Lively]

Lovely and a nice play of words...

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

shade i think should be shed...

i got a bit confused in the middle, but it was good at the end though =] need a little good reread i think =]

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I really like this write. it's beautiful.

[Tai Ryens]

Beautiful write, with a couple problems. I've noticed that you have a small problem with past and present tenses, and it even shows, like the word 'cry' in here is used quite wrongly. It should be 'crying'. Also 'shade'. If I read that right, it should be 'shed'. Despite that, its a great piece. Keep up the hard work!

[naruto]

fine

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An awesome poem, this is so great, love the theme, and the endless love, excellent :)