I'm Mistaken ..Forgive me

I didn’t want to tell you the truth

But I’m sorry for making this happen

I know I’m a liar

But I truly care for you

I love you more than you do..

 

I know I made that big mistake

But I hope I can erase it away

And forget this lime I lied to you one day …

I will try my best

To make your smile show on..

 

Never cry ..cause you mean a lot to me

You mean to me my castle and my only dream

I want to always be beside you

And make you happy always and forever ..

Author's Note

Hope you like it..
and im sorry =/

Reviews

[khalid]

the emotions in it are really very strong, keep on

[Dove]

Very nice. I enjoyed reading this piece. I think its sweet, romantic, and over all its impressive. I love how you expressed what was on your mind.

[Desmund Tiny]

awwwwww. so sweet and romantic.... ^^,

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Aww... so sweet and romantic! Nicely written...

[Hoosier Belle]

Awe this one pulls gently across the heart, emotional read...nicly done!

[Boldpen]

Breath- taking.
The words were very strong and did touched the heart.
Extremely beautiful.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This certain mr.A will be thrilled by this poem, very endearing and lovely,
excellent :D