Sorry...But move on

You always ask about my heart

Is it with someone or alone?

But i always answer I'm alone...

 

I know i hurtted your heart

And I made it full of thorns

But I’m sorry ; I didn't mean to ...

 

It is just that

My heart didn't call yours

And i wanted to have a man

But i found you like my bro!

 

I know how you loved me madly

And i admit that

But for now I'm sorry

I want to be alone ..

Author's Note

You can move on easily ....

Reviews

[khalid]

not that easy to move on when it is concerned with love affairs, but life has to go on anyway.
but what do you think if you change, is my heart with someone or alone into, if my heart is busy or free?

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastically portrayed..!!!!

[Andrea Vargas]

Lovely , just lovely! Good write (;

[Dove]

I really love this. I'm going to have to tell a certain boy to read this poem lol. I definately felt the emotion in this, great job!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like the optomistic message

[sugar]

very good...i wish a sertain someone i know would read this...

[Lively]

Liked it!

[Tai Ryens]

I loved this poem, it's so amazingly written. Just a couple small grammar problems, the biggest being the first line of the second stanza. Great job on this on!

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

I love it so much, I can never count how much you wrote...( of course, masterpieces)

[Boldpen]

Seriously emotional...
Loved this piece. So much sunk in feelings.
Wonderful creation.