Stop Writing

Stop writing ..

 

I don’t want any messages from you

I want you to be clear please!!

Just move on in this life

And try to find that real you …

Face your biggest fear

Which you can call love !!

 

Just stop writing anything

Stop searching for an excuse

Move ..Move… Move…

You will get loved as long as you admit

But man make your last act …

Face it now…

You know I do like you

But please I want to hear that …

 

It won’t work and I’m sure

But give it a shot

Cause not always it miss

But for now baby …

Stop writing and make your act …

Author's Note

I hope you like it .....
and hey ...stop writing :P

Reviews

[khalid]

it is great encouragement to be more practical and do real steps in life. i agree with that because some people really prison themselves in their own thoughts because some of them dont have enough courage to face outer world. i hope their way of life would change after they read your advice, but hope all of them can read it although you wanted only one to read and do what you say in it

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fabulous..!!!

[Dove]

This is really interesting. The message the reader recieves is great and I kind of agree with Andrea Vargas. The beginning of the poem was strong and towards the end the pace slowed down and wasnt as strong. But it still is a great poem.

[Andrea Vargas]

Its interesting.... I feel though your flow started lacking towards the end.... I like your message, its kind of sweet in a I dont care kind of way... Nice

[Inyourshadow]

Was gonna review but you said stop writing thought it was a pop quiz with the teacher telling us to put down our pens lol. What is it they s... Or get off the pot well sounds like this guy needs to do just that. Emotional and clearly personal. Keep em' coming

[Enigma]

True. It is so annoying when someone you love and who porbably loves you back cannot muster up the courage to come out with it. Your poem taks exactly about that. Well done.

[Thea]

Nice poem...
I like how you express your feelings here...
:)))

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Real raw piece!
:]

[Tai Ryens]

Great piece, its different from your other styles. You told him off well :P