Same feelings I think ...

I always ask you

Do you really love  me

No answer can be said

Just a change of subject is what you did…

 

You are that gentle man

That is so embarrassed to say

For a girl or a cutie

That he loves her madly ..

 

You are the kind of guys

That wait to get

But don’t plane to give

And can’t feel that …

But you gave me

The greatest thing that I want …

 

I might be also lying to you

About the fact

That I don’t like you

Jealousy will kill me over you

Cause you don’t feel

That cute you …

 

You might not be a hero

But you are better that “superman”

Cause you help me through

In all my tough times…

 

Man! For being honest

My thoughts about you are still the same

Since I said: “I love you” till this day

Love is killing me day over day

But please baby

Save me from this pain ….

 

15/11/2011

9:54 PM

Author's Note

He is really a hero ....
hope you like it :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A terific poem, and yes sometimes people can be shy to say they love someone, hardest step in many ways,
"You might not be a hero
But you are better that “superman”
Cause you help me through
In all my tough times…"

That captures the essensce of love, in that just being oneself is what the other person loves about you...

Brilliant xD

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely write..!!!!

[Dove]

This is sucb a sweet poem. I really enjoyed the read. The fact that you wrote this for a friend shows that you are a kind sweet person.

[Thea]

"Love is killing me day over day
But please baby
Save me from this pain …."
Such love can change everything...
I really like this poem...Nicely written... :)))

[Tai Ryens]

Not to be a Grammar Nazi here, but I found a couple problems regarding some of the lines.
" But you are better that “superman” " Shouldn't 'that' be 'than'?
" You are the kind of guys " Based on the following line, it should be singular.

Just basically small problems, doesn't really render the poem unfathomable or something, it's just a small problem to me, as I am always bothered by such small things. Great poem though!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

The ones who we truly love always seem perfect to us, no matter what.
I also like the font and color too.
:)

[EMF]

Superb. A wondeerful message of love and self reliance. Terrific work, superbly crafted and as professional as it get's. Terrific work

[Andrea Vargas]

Wow... well first off its nicely written and secon off i love the content and the love that its wrapped in (: great job (: