Flying With Love

Hold my dreams tight

And make me fly

On the wings of you my butterfly

You made me see

The pictures of my past vivid

And all the smiles we drawn

On the face of the shining sun

You erased all the frowns

And sang for me the best love songs

Starting with the first look

And i want it to be a non-ending one

Let it be like a vampire

Immortal for ever

But for this moment

Be sure that

I LOVE YOU

Author's Note

Requested by someone..
what do you think of that ?....

Reviews

[Dove]

Short, simple. nice, sweet, and beautifull.

[EMF]

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This poem has such passion!

[Enigma]

A beautiful poem about love. :)

[Andrea Vargas]

I say someone is struggling with love.. I hope things work out for you! As for the poem it was lovely..

[khalid]

feelings are flooding from words like water flooding from rivers, very nice

[Thea]

Aw, so nice poem!
Very well delivered...
:)))

[Lively]

I really liked it!!!!!!

[Tai Ryens]

Pleasing poem, I very much enjoyed this write with great delight. The first three lines are brilliant, perfectly written. The vampire part doesn't really appeal to me, as I have no specific interests with vampires of today. ( Vampires from books of the 1950's are kind of interesting, however. )