Vampire Bite

Vampire Bite

 

You took me to a place

Where no people were there

Just you and me

In that red B.M.W car

 

The moon was full

In the mid of the night

And that spell was meant to be said …

You dove in a high speed

And put your car

Under the tree center of that forest ..

 

I was scared

But feeling safe

Just because you were beside …

 

You held my hands so tight

And my heart beats increased so high

You said: “It’s the moment of truth”

I was surprised

Cause I thought that I know everything about you

But I’m so in love with you

I said that in my heart

But my loud voice said :”tell me”

 

You said:

“I’m a vampire and today is the day..”

“Day for what ?”

you were my hero

you were my eco

you were my immortal soul

 

your voice said sweetly :

“To bite you

To make you be mine

Not forever but for the non-forever”

 

I couldn’t held my words

When you were getting closer

To bite my neck

But all my words were said in an act

I put my hand on your smooth face

And when you put you teeth there

Before biting ,you looked at me and asked :
“Won’t you try to stop me “

I said with full confident :

“no , I love you

And I want to be immortal

Just to lay in your hands

And your eyes would be my light

Even your skin under the sun

I would totally love !!!”

 

You were shocked by my words

But you couldn’t thought

That I’d love you for the non-end

“Bite me now

My shining vampire
Make me immortal

My sweet vampire

Make me yours

My only love “

 

You drank my blood

I changed so quick

But all I want to

Is to be beside you

 

You did that

And now be sure

That I will LOVE YOU

For the non-end “

 

30/10/2011

9:33 PM

Author's Note

Hope you like it..

i took the idea of a movie on disney channel :"My baby sitter is a vampire "
so yeah.. hope you like this story :)

Reviews

[Thea]

Aw, I miss the movie Twilight! XD
Love this poem... :)))

[...]

Really amazing! Loved this

[Sweets]

it kinda reminds me of twilight o.0
the first part....when this dude wants to kill the girl D:
but yea, total awesomeness =0

[Lily Mae]

I really enjoyed this.. :) excellent write...xx

[Desmund Tiny]

A poem inspired by vampire...I LOVE IT!!!!! time doesn't matter as long as you are happy with the one you love...... ^^,

[Sleeping Maiden]

Loving this vampire inspired poem!!! =D Well-written and just lovely!
It's awesome that you got inspired by that movie.. =) ha. Cool.

[EMF]

The poem is well done and sesuously written...But Vampires... The poem however is exceptional. Great work Kid

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Well you took disney inspiration but made it so intense and sensual....perfect poem...love your take on it...perfection :)