Vampire Bite

Vampire Bite

 

You took me to a place

Where no people were there

Just you and me

In that red B.M.W car

 

The moon was full

In the mid of the night

And that spell was meant to be said …

You dove in a high speed

And put your car

Under the tree center of that forest ..

 

I was scared

But feeling safe

Just because you were beside …

 

You held my hands so tight

And my heart beats increased so high

You said: “It’s the moment of truth”

I was surprised

Cause I thought that I know everything about you

But I’m so in love with you

I said that in my heart

But my loud voice said :”tell me”

 

You said:

“I’m a vampire and today is the day..”

“Day for what ?”

you were my hero

you were my eco

you were my immortal soul

 

your voice said sweetly :

“To bite you

To make you be mine

Not forever but for the non-forever”

 

I couldn’t held my words

When you were getting closer

To bite my neck

But all my words were said in an act

I put my hand on your smooth face

And when you put you teeth there

Before biting ,you looked at me and asked :
“Won’t you try to stop me “

I said with full confident :

“no , I love you

And I want to be immortal

Just to lay in your hands

And your eyes would be my light

Even your skin under the sun

I would totally love !!!”

 

You were shocked by my words

But you couldn’t thought

That I’d love you for the non-end

“Bite me now

My shining vampire
Make me immortal

My sweet vampire

Make me yours

My only love “

 

You drank my blood

I changed so quick

But all I want to

Is to be beside you

 

You did that

And now be sure

That I will LOVE YOU

For the non-end “

 

30/10/2011

9:33 PM

Author's Note

Hope you like it..

i took the idea of a movie on disney channel :"My baby sitter is a vampire "
so yeah.. hope you like this story :)

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Quite amazing:-)

[marybeth davis]

i am in total awe of this is so good :) love it !!!!!!

[Andrea Vargas]

Not forever but for the non-forever” I like this line.... This particular read was enjoyable, but i feel it lacked in flow... work on the way you form your stanzas and sentances

[M.Babu]

Haha...enjoyable read this was!

Thanks for putting a smile on my face with this admirable and cute piece :D

"“Bite me now
My shining vampire
Make me immortal
My sweet vampire
Make me yours
My only love “"
Thanks for this!
~M.Babu~

[Dove]

I've only seen that movie one time but I loved it. Its awesome!!! Almost has good as this poem lol. Beautiful job!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice story!

[Sleepless]

omg i love that movie have you seen te series? i love ti thoguh amzign poem nice imagery i felt like if i was watchign the whole scen right in front of me !:)

[Jeremy Baker]

I like it!

[khalid]

nice poem proves the idea ( love is pain) and the desire of couples to be united in one soul and one body