Midnight breeze

Midnight breeze

 

We were standing on the shore

And the sweet breezes are beside

Hitting our faces and knocking on the door

Of romance to open and make its role …

 

My hair was dancing

And covering yours with sweet kisses

Hold your hands  like blessings

And loving you more than you are doing …

 

You hugged me so tight

And make me feel alright

Holding me between your hands my knight

And look toward the stars of that night ..

 

The breezes make you closer

And making me feel warmer

You blew the candles of sadness

And kissed frowns a goodbye ..

 

All of that happened like a dream

Under the midnightbreeze

I will never forget the freeze

And how you made me feel not ..

 

Boy…

I love you a lot

With or with out

The mid night breeze

 

23/10/2011

9:06 PM

Author's Note

i hope you like this :D
cause i loved this especially the last stanza :D
Enjoy :D

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

its beautiful but i feel it lacks in stanza two because you have a rhyme scheme going at the begiining and the end but stanza two is alone in its own words.. Now if thats what you were going for then what i got from it was that it is a symbol for how love is strong yet sometimes its hard to be in love and you sometimes Stand Alone, even in the most wonderful relationship. I do love the last stanza to, its the perfect ending to this lovely poem of romance

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very sweet and beautiful. Midnight talks are always amazing!!

[Desmund Tiny]

I adore the scene and how it goes.... so sweet.... great write

[Dove]

Aww this scene is adorable lol. Love it!

[Sleepless]

i adre this poem is wonderful what a sweet tune in this one love it !:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Awwwww...
the scene is so cute!

[khalid]

midnight talk is always sweet. you made us remember the taste of it by making us live it. thanks

[Thea]

So sweet...Totally nice poem...Keep it up...
Happy bday... :)))

[Tai Ryens]

Beautiful poem, especially the last stanza. It makes me think of somebody reading this aloud and slowly slipping away into the darkness, which makes this poem make me think even more. Great poem!